Friday, December 5, 2008

Claribel's Reading Eassay


The young man main problem is that he wants to learn how to carve elephants. One example is that he asked the old man how to carve elephants. A second example is that the old man told him I cannot teach you how to carve elephant but I could teach you how to carve stones. A third example is that he wanted to stay one more year to learn more how to carve stones. Clearly the young man main problem is that he wants to learn how to carve elephants.

The problem was resolved because the old man thought the little kid how to carve stones but not how to carve elephants. One example is that he told the old man that he need more time because he does not know that well. Another example is that the old man said fine you will stay for one more year. A third example is that he stood for one more year to learn a little more.

I predict that the young man is going to carve stones . One example is that he is going to do one. Another example is that he is going to bring it to the meausueum. A third example is that he is going to pick up his tools , the young man went to work and set the tiger free. Clearly I predict that the young man is going to carve stones.

6 comments:

Denisis 605 said...

Dear claribel

I like your blog post because it was very good.the best pat about you essay is that it mches your picture.one suggestion is that you should get a real picture.

sincerely,denisis vargas

Tammy 605 said...

Dear claribel

I like your blog post because it was interesting to me. The best part of your essay is the second paragraph. One suggestion is nothing because it so good

sincerely
Tammy Bernaredz

Kelvin 605 said...

Dear claribel

I like your blogs post because the picture matches your story

the best part is when you explain and gave example

one suggestion is to put a period at the end of your sentaces

Amy 605 said...

Dear claribel,

I like your blogs post because the picture matches your story

the best part is when you explain and gave example

one suggestion is to put a period at the end of your sentaces

sincerely amy ortiz

Arlie 605 said...

Dear Claribel,
I like your blog because it has good grammar.

Marilyn 605 said...

Dear Claribel
klk muchacha
i like your essay ok and the picture k peace out
sincely Marilyn Martinez